oh, not fluffy atall. but i still luv it! exactly what i needed to read (i really wanted a kinda bone chilling thing right now) it's really good!!

*two thumbs up* good story! i love reading him turn demon and still caring for kagome. keep up the good work!

Wow you're really good.

I generally like your stories. But this time... I felt it was an unoriginal cheap-shot at trying to create a romantic, or even heroic, moment between the two. I mean really, being stripped of her clothes while brutally beaten?
You've written amazing one-shots before, but I simply didn't like this particular plot.

Intense. That is all I have to say.

I like how you used the metephore of a phenix/ hanyou to the bandits that would never rise again that was brilliant, but yes what she endured was sad it reminds me of one of the movies i watch not to long ago. " Feast of all Saints" were one of the women slaves were beaten and whats worst is " Passion of the Christ". No man or woman should even go through such treatment. Im just glad Inuyasha was there for her and that this is fictional compared to these true life stories that are dipicted in movies.

That was brutal. I hate it when hse gets raped by normal men.

How horrid. But, unfortunately, how lifelike. Very well written and true to character. Very moving.

Very nice. I especially liked the ending line.

nice story... really liked it... good job... great work...

This is a really dark story, but I really like it. I also like that there is very little dialogue and a lot of detail, so excellent job!

I hope to see another story out soon!

~Hannahkimi