This is was beautifully done.

aw poor alice! frankly though i think the bell would just depress me more, remind me i cant tell theyre coming

That was sad. Nicely written. :D

i love it and i want you to continue lol

It's so sad... That's very well written and thought! I particularly like the flashback when they met Bella, maybe because it lighten the whole fic a bit! I'd like to read the point of view of Jasper, what he's thinking about Alice's behaviour... keep on writing (sorry for the possible mistakes, English is not my mother tongue) ;)