Great chapter! You have skills to write so well and really make the reader feel like that really is JAmal lenni or rob talking and etc! You should write more!

You defintely got the characters spot on! I love the conversation, and I can totally picture the characters acting and talking this way! Nice job! I cannot wait to review the rest of the chapters!!:)

Awesome. Catch ya on the flip side.

Ha ha. That sounds like Alex. These goons have sister and he wants her back. Great job. Catch ya on the flip side.

Awesome job. Short is better than nothing. Keep up the good work. Catch ya on the flip side.

awesome storyline seriously. i hope you update soon. i can't wait to see what will happen with gaby and hector .. not to mention the party drugs.

can you do a lenni/alex story i love the couple of alex/lenni

Great job. Keep it up. Catch ya on the flip side.

slipping stuff in people's drink at parties. hehe i love the adultish mystery. :) hoping you update soon.

Very cool. Thanks for the heads up. Keep it up. Catch ya on the flip side.

hey i like this story, it takes about the issue on where teenagers slipped drugs into other people's drink. It still happens today, too. You and your friend should continue to write happened next. Great job on the story and the important issue.

Mm-hm...i think i like it! And i also like the fact that people are starting to write Ghostwriter stories on fanfic! Please please keep posting!

I love it. What eles is going to happen?