A reviewer mentioned that our stories were alike. I am not a twilight hater. But I agree, Stephanie Meyer is a poor writer. And I have to admit I stopped reading about halfway through your story so it doesn't influence mine. But from what I did read, it was good. Million times better than what took Meyer a whole book to do.

This is a really good rewrite as far as rewrites go, but Stephanie Meyer, although the books are a little cheezie, is not that bad of an author. VAMPIRES DONY SPARKLE!

Personally, I'm an anti as well, but it's extremely rude of you write what you did about SMeyer. It's perfectly fine to dislike Twilight, calling someone a ** for being in relation to the book is uncalled for. Also, if you feel it's absolutely necessary to say Stephenie Meyer took no time to write Twilight, you might want to look into checking for grammatical errors and run-on sentences yourself. There were a lot and it was hard to follow the story because of them.

ok that was so good!
im a fangirl,(not a very strong one, mind u but one nontheless). i got to say that that was better than any stupid c* stephenie wrote. u shood seriously consider a career in writing. ur better than u think

i actually really like what you did with the story... you have a good plot here. have you ever thought of continuing this story?

honestly, i like twilight, but i'm not a fangirl (unlike my friend - itwillbeasifineverexisted). I do like your version though. good work!

Well...that was...weird. It was basically the same beginning as the book just Charlie hits her and her mom is crazy. There were also a lot of run-ons and grammatical errors, and one thing I noticed in Interview with a Vampire, his name is Louis not Lois... and I'm almost positive that you could care less, but Bella's real name is Isabella, not Isabel. Also, just out of curiosity, if you claim to hate Twilight so much why bother even posting anything? Was is just so Twilight fans would no that you hate it? BTW, good job we get the point.

Wow. This take on twilight was... Well, words are failing me just about now, and I can't think of a proper way to say how... Different (yes I guess that'll have to do) this was. Obviously, you wanted more of a character from bella where instead of being shy, overly friendly, geeky, or... showy, she would be more blunt about her peers/family and general life. No sugar coatings and such. Don't get me wrong, this is an orginal and, remarably insulting (to the other characters and people) story, but if Bella was really like that in the original story it wouldn't have gotten as many readers because of the general négative outlook/writing.
I don't think that made any sense what so freakin ever.
But it's a breath of fresh air when reading a remix like this.
Good job, and i cant wait for more from you.

I respect your opinion on Twilight, it isn't for everyone and there are a lot of things about the book that I didn't even like. Though, if you don't want fan girls to direct their problems to you then maybe you should respect their opinions of Twilight as well. Is it really necessary to say those things about the author and publisher where Twilight fanfiction is posted?

As for your story, it is pretty much the same as Twilight. You just changed it to a more typical, dramatic situation with her parents that has been done over and over again. I am interested in what you would change further on in the story, but I would of suggested going a different route with the parent situation.

It was basically the same beginning, just Bella is more bitter and her dad beats her. There were quite a few run-ons and grammatical errors, make sure you proofread before you post. If you hate Meyer's books so much, why are you choosing to write fanfiction on it? Just curious.