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baou21
2009-11-10 . chapter 4
Chapters are short but I don't mind.

So far I think this is pretty good cant wait for it to be updated!
Agent Krivins
2009-02-24 . chapter 4
I'm not a music person so I don't know a single song that Claire was listening to. An IPod can sure come in handy on a plane though. It makes the time zip on by a little faster.

I wonder who that man that's sitting beside Claire on the plane is? Claire has a familiar feeling about the guy which makes it slightly possible that she came in brief contact with him at some point in the past.

Alexia's test dummies... yikes! Sounds just like what she would do. Yep, A evil woman that has no regard for human life. It makes you wonder what else she has created?

I think Adalia should be fine if she stays close to Steve. Adalia getting a feeling she's about to be eating isn't exactly positive thinking, is it. Well, hope she can continue to keep her cool.

So Claire reached Africa. This should turn out good. I personally think Claire made a terrible mistake of going to Africa alone. She should ahve at least brought someone... or at least told someone where she has gone. But She is very capable of taking care of herself. I just hope she knows what she's getting into.

Wesker and Alexia is no joke! They'll tear Claire to pieces if she's not careful. Or have their "dummies" do it for them.

Awesome chapter! You're doing amazingly well with this one. Keep on keepin on and please update soon!
Vieraheart15
2009-02-24 . chapter 4
Hey! I thought I was the only one who wrote Wesker and Alexia as a couple. I like that pairing (heck, Alexia is my second favourite character) and it's much better than the twincest stories I've seen. Update soon. I like this.
Drackwolf
2009-02-24 . chapter 4
YAY! Claire finally is in Africa! and i see you did a onger chapter, well done :) , cant wait for the next.
Drackwolf
2009-02-14 . chapter 2
it was pretty good!... but theres a problem... steve died in December XD
Agent Krivins
2009-02-09 . chapter 3
Wesker is so darn evil. He does know how to ** somebody off. My jaw dropped when Alexia came into the picture and I laughed when she slapped Steve. I know I shouldn't have but man that was funny. Poor Steve.

Wesker and Alexia... a couple? Now there's something I haven't seen before. My jaw practically fell off when Alexia kissed Wesker. Two deadly rivals join forces... scary stuff, man.

Alexia is another that's so darn evil. The way she speaks in this chapter... sounds just like her. You did a very good job on that.

When Alexia slapped Adalia, OW, that's gotta hurt. (Very cool character BTW) Steve saluting to Wesker and Alexia? I bet Wesker made that a rule... no wait... sounds more like Alexia had a hand in that one.

I do hope Steve and Adalia get out but I doubt it will be easy. This story is great. You really did surprise me with the new chapters and I just can't wait for the rest. I'm very interested and especially excited to see what happens next.
Agent Krivins
2009-02-09 . chapter 2
Wow. I like this one. So it would seem that Steve is alive and he is having trouble meeting Wesker's expectations... of killing innocent people. Wesker sure is still up to his old tricks again.

I wonder who Steve had deliver the birthday present? It must be someone Steve trusts severly and someone who is able to get close enough to him without being detected by Wesker.

I think a Heart necklace is I very thoughtful gift. One she can cherish dearly. But darn it! I want to know who delivered the package. I know you probably had no intention on sharing who did the delivery but he or she is one trust worthy person. I mean he/she knows Steve and found Claire, who I might add is being hunted by Wesker.

Angela and Leon are getting married? That's so cool. Chris and Jill are on vacation. Claire is very caring to not want to break up either pairs enjoyment but she's going to need some help on such an assignment. I know she can take care of herself but going up against Wesker alone is no laughing matter.

I did enjoy this chapter and will immediately read the next one.
yingyanggirl
2009-02-09 . chapter 3
nice.
yingyanggirl
2009-02-09 . chapter 2
good
Drackwolf
2009-01-30 . chapter 1
i like it :3, more more! :), the crazy steve fans says it XD
Mak owo
2009-01-27 . chapter 1
I b stalking you! rawr!
Very sad and romantic >w< Love it!
yingyanggirl
2009-01-26 . chapter 1
okay, but a bit short :(
Agent Krivins
2009-01-26 . chapter 1
Quite a sad story. It is small, but it is also very good. I thought that was genious to put Steve's wristband in Claire's possession. It gives her something to remember him by.

I did enjoy the description you gave on the snow outside. It was very visual for me. (Outside the snow lightly dusted the ground. It glistened as the flakes danced around in the air before gentley falling to the ground)It sounds like a poem. But like I said this part gave me a very understanding visual of Claire's surroundings.

I feel just terrible for her. Claire is undoubtably my favorite Resident Evil hero...(Wesker being my Favorite villain) and when I see her in such destress, it gets me down. But I do understand her pain. Losing someone you love can be a very difficult thing to overcome.

Excellent work! I look forward to the next chapter.
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