awwww, loved it! xxxxx

Just a point of cannon. They were in Bella's truck.

You wrote Esme's POV really well, showing her compassionate nature and concern for Edward. My only criticism would be that wish you had carried it on to show her thoughts as the visit progressed, particularly when Alice just bounces straight up and kisses Bella on the cheek.

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Wow this is really good update soon ok!1

aw, that was extremely sweet!

*sniff* ah, darn it! you choked me up with that last line, and you might owe me some dental bills for how sweet this is.

aw! :D this is so sweet. i really liked it. i'm glad someone finally did her pov, but i think you could have continued until the piano scene, when she left to give them privacy. well that doesn't matter, this is a very good story/scene/moment-whatever, it was good. lol :D

oh this was a really good one. im currently writing a short fanfic of this, except with carlisle pov. well done. )

Is there going to be anymore to this? It seems like it should go somewhere.

I noticed you didn't mark it "Complete", so...

Yay! I liked it! update soon!

argh none of the stories are finished i love this too!

Um... I didn't see any errors whoever commented below. On the contrary, it was PERFECT! You're so good at everybody's mind, how bitter Rosalie is, how sweet Esme is, how innocent Alice is and how suffer-in-silence Edward is. I really love it! DEFINITELY KEEP WRITING!

i like this story, i will keep reading and reveiwing if you keep writing. :] so please do. some errors i think, but other than that it was a great story.