I really need to get my mind out of the gutter.. Take a wild guess at what I was thinking through the first couple of paragraphs. (:
Other than that, perfect job! The imagery was wonderful.
Wow, this was really sweet. I haven't always r/r'd, but I'd like to more since the SA authors seem very considerate in doing so. This is my first SA review, and well diserved. I love this. Great job.