While I think this is rather interesting so far, I have to say that I'm a little bothered by the fact that you're using a language from another game in it...
Anyway, I'm not here to be a wet blanket; and I'm very curious to see where you will go with this concept...and I hope to see what else you've got for us soon.

I would have given this a better review, but quite frankly, you're so utterly obnoxious you don't really deserve one.

Bioware are sequelling Chronicles. So maybe then you can whine about "wasted potential".

You actually took the time to put in Al Bhed? how bored were you? great... now i have to find a cypher. oh well keeps me interested. don't dissaponit! solid ground.

The great Sonic Rose is doing a Chronicles adaptation?! *anime eye shimmer* ^_^ Glorious day...

This seems interesting so far ^-^, u have me hooked, cant wait for an update :D! ^^