 Gothic Lust 2009-10-26 . chapter 2I like it, but I agree with you. This second installment is missing something, and I think it's the romance aspect. It may need a bit more hints to it. However, I understand why it's so downplayed. The two never thought of each other in that light until Lavi decided to hook them up with the tale of Beauty and the Beast (Which is by the way, genius!).
I hope that you will one day add another piece to this...maybe with Komui's reaction to the situation (that will be funny XD).
Absolutely loved this peace. Keep up the good work.
--Gothic Lust |
 xxbeni.music 2009-06-18 . chapter 2Aww, so uberly cool!!
I can die happily soaking in the KandaLee goddie!! |
 ShadowAmunet 2009-06-06 . chapter 2This tis special. It wasn't that bad of a second chapter, so you don't have to worry about it too much. I liked it for the most part, and the only thing is, i'm sure that Lavi would have memorized just about all of the books in the library seeing as he's the bookkeeper and can remember the tiniest details. anyway. good fic.
Happy Writing |
 Hikaru Kiryuu 2009-05-18 . chapter 2Hahaha, Asexual! Kanda asexual? what was thinking xD
Poor Kanda, Don’t hit a girl…don’t a hit a girl… that phrase.
Excelent two-shot, and i´d like read the other version :P |
 pibinezz 2009-05-03 . chapter 2awsome! i love this pair! |
 Tears of Eternal Darkness 2009-04-28 . chapter 2hehe that was a good ending. very funny.
=^-^= |
 stundenglas 2009-04-15 . chapter 2Yeah Kanda, don't hit her!
I don't care if you're satisfied with it. I had fun reading it. Oh and all those AW-moments xD
I love your story, and it's in my opinion it's one of the best Kanda/Lenalee stories on ^^ |
 zenbon zakura 2009-04-13 . chapter 2pf hahahahahahh bwahahahahahahah OMG
ROFLMFAOTDM! hahahahahahahahhahahahhahahahahah *goes on laughing for another 30 min* OMG
lol
best kanda lenalee fan fic ever! lol
asexual!?!?!?!?!?!? hahahahahahhahhaahhahahhahahhahhahahaa! |
 Ribs On The Run 2009-04-13 . chapter 2Nice fic! So very cute, and so very Lenalee and Kanda~ Erm, if that made sense.
“The idea of intimacy must be very frightening to him,” she reckoned.
Lavi sniggered. “Then the man should get ready to be terrified.”
That line made me bawl with laughter. |
 HypRRNeRd 2009-04-13 . chapter 2ROFL, you came up with the most hilarious endings! |
 HypRRNeRd 2009-04-13 . chapter 1LOL, the ending was funny. |
 VirgoStargirl 2009-04-13 . chapter 2Oh... that was beautiful... hang on... (reaches the end)
"..." (smacks self in forehead) perfect... just perfect. Love this fic, and the ending... *sighs, then dissolves into helpless laughter* |
 wirbil 2009-04-13 . chapter 2It would be nice if you had a third installment to this. ^^ It would be heart-breaking if you didn't have something after this. But most importantly I want to see Komui's reaction to Kanda holding hands with Lenalee. :D |
 VirgoStargirl 2009-02-27 . chapter 1Absolutely beautiful (please, pardon my puns...)! Can you keep this one going, please? It's working out so well. Love this story, great ideas! Who'd've thought Tyki, of all people (a Noah, for heaven's sake!) would be trying to help two exorcists, even if it's romantic, not combat (with Kanda, almost anything is like a battle, though...) [Tyki's my sis's fave character, and Kanda's mine.]
Anyway... I tend to ramble...
To the point: Great story! Update soon! (there, done) |
 Tears of Eternal Darkness 2009-02-05 . chapter 1oh wow. i love how you incorperated the Beauty and the Beast story into this and the repeat of the question really worked. well done.
=^-^= |