aw! so cute! Amon gave her a kiss on the forehead>.< I wonder what will happen when she wakes up for good and is released from the hospital. How will he make sure that he never lets her out of his sight agian? I can think of many possiblilties the first being marriage. (I really do hope it's that one)AmonXRobin forever!

aw so cute *wipes away tear*

Amon's wishing Takama had been just a bit more stubborn about that door, hmm? I like that he's refusing to leave her side, and I was going to say that he was reminding me of a puppy in that aspect, but he's really more of a cat, isn't he?

I have to say, it's the little details like Karasuma being snippy or Doujima working herself to exhaustion that show the family dynamic of the team and just how much this has affected each of them.

As far as Amon going after Takama...I have no doubt that he wants to, but getting the man out of the Factory to exact vengeance just opens up the possibility for him to slither away. Not to mention the can of worms that is the Factory itself...

And don't worry about it being short. Sometimes short pieces work where longer ones wouldn't. This serves nicely as a bridge between the race against the clock and the slow road to recovery.

Question- Are you going to have Amon go after Takama? I know he's at the factory, I was wondering if hw would go after him anyway?

please finish the story let robin and amon be together

Nicely done

...I'm torn. On one hand, I really want to pet Robin's hair (the only action that I can think of that is comforting and not entirely likely to hurt the poor dear), but I also want to cheer on Amon (he showed remarkable restraint with Takama and then was able to be calm when Robin probably needed it most, on top of it, taking a huge risk in getting them out).

I'm also very tempted to kick Takama, but that's beyond the point.

Robin has a lot of healing ahead of her, not only physically, but mentally as well. As much as this has shaken the entire team, I think that they are going to need her just as much as she will need them. Amon included, even though he'll probably insist that he's fine.

I have to admit, as much as I would LOVE to see Takama's sins revisited upon him, I really do not want the team to stoop to his level. However much I may loathe the man.

At any rate, excellent work, as usual, and I'm very relieved that a happy ending is not out of the cards. I'm looking forward to more.

Have fun writing, and good luck with the UFOs,
Cat

Very good story though I think that the torture is a bit soft. Though I am a huge fan of Robin I do think that takama could be a but harder on Robin. Reechan37

I really love this story, i think you capture the charecters really well. I fell bad about saying this, but i love the part where Robin was being shocked(Sorry Robin). Actually i think that's funny because in all the story ideas i have usually someone is being mortally injured but i never thought or anything happening to poor Robin!
I'm usually pretty critical on things but i don't see anything to comment about except: What does 'kuso' mean?
This is amazing, can't wait for the next chapter!

Good Amon, he's working things out. I know he's five seconds from pitching something across the room (again), but the fact that he's actually picking up on subtle clues to the stalker/kidnapper/sadistic bastard's identity and location speaks wonders for his restraint. And the fact that he IS five seconds from throwing something tells how much he actually does care.

Props for having Miho pick up on the fact that this is actually distressing him: she's (presumably) been around him the longest and even the best poker faces have tells.

Additionally, nice detail, having Robin drop a hint about the man even with the amount of pain she must be in. She's a very smart girl.

I've been meaning to review for a while, but things have been nuts and I've had to play fic catch-up. The rating should be alright for now, there isn't really anything explicit (which is another point I applaud you on: we know how bad it is without seeing it because of the team's reactions), however, you may want to include a warning in further chapters. You don't have to include spoilers for the chapter, just a general warning of content. The idea of notifying which areas to skip is a good one, but can also be detrimental to the flow of a story. Honestly though, it is up to you.

And forgive me if I sound like a squeeing fangirl when I say, OMG I'm still loving this!

love the chapter please let amon and robin be together till next time

lol I am sorry the ending made me crack XD its a good chapter I can't wait for more hehe XD

Wow. I have never seen anyone keep a character so in character as you have, including myself. Good job! I like where you're going with this. It is very interesting. There are a few mistakes with grammar here and there, mainly commas, but that's okay. I like how you made the message mocking, in a sense. This is quite an unique plot. I would like to read more.

The beginning was good. The descriptions of the workers were good. Very well written, except I'd have to say Robin. That was not quite right. A little bit Dojima, too.

Take this as a lot of praise. I usually give very harsh reviews to people. Or I could have softened...which I think I have...damn.

Well, anyways, keep it up.

Ugh...I've definately softened.

~PrideIsArrogance~

please finish the story also will amon and robin will get together please let them do

can't wait for the next