Sob. You were the only one actually doing stuff like that. frowny face.

i like it and would like to see it continued, please

what about eagle fox or snake they would be good

*pout
Alright... go live your life wild and free and sans fanfiction.

That was fantastic! I loved your portrayal of wolf. It seemed spot on to me. The character just seemed so accurate, almost as if you were there, inside his head.

I really like your view on Wolf's thoughts and that was a perfectly okay last line. I think it would be interesting to see what Sabina really thinks of Alex.

I liked the last line! This was really good, I liked it a lot. Keep up the good work!

Damn, this is the best chappie so far. Wonderful job! _

I love this story! All of the characters are exactly how I pictured them and it has some things that I didn't even think about associating with them until now! Please update soon! :D

Loved this one. I think you completely nailed Wolf here
Nylah

Hi, nice insight into Jack's character. I still don't quite get her though. I somehow have the feeling she's not doing anything tho _help_ him. MI6 cart him off on some dangerous mission and I know she doesn't have the power to stop them from doing that, but somehow she seems a bit... lax. Dunno.
Like I said. Can't figure her out.

Nylah

Alright, now this was really good. Of course, Wolf thinks Alex is a whiny rich kid. I never thought of that, and nor has anyone else on fanfiction that I've read, but it's perfect. I now have a burning desire to read more in this vein from you. Maybe you could write a one-shot or story where Wolf meets Alex again, all these beliefs and deductuions in mind. That would make me).

I love how you write. It's well into character. Just one canon fault: Wolf did hear about Cub. He must have because he send a get well card when he was in St. Dominics. Else everything is well writen.

Keep on writing.

hey its really good! you should do someone like tom or random school person or teacher next

wow! i like..not LOVE it! very deep . would be great if you could do just a oneshot but of snake, eagle and fox