Nice way of explaining how they met. Nobody ever talks about where Odessa came from, near as I can tell. Nice to see, for once.

Campy and quick-my favorite!

cool but one thing i would like to know is Mitch in your story the same one in the game (the flower power general)

OOOOHOHOHOHOHO! MORE FLIK/ODESSA FOR THE... uh... FLIK/ODESSA LOVING PEOPLES! :D

Great so far! XD The abundant scary yaoi fanfics were starting to creep me out. You've saved the TRAD people.

PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE THIS! PLEEEEEEAAAAAAAASE! great fic keep it up _