 my name is paper YAH 2009-11-11 . chapter 1this was hilarious and totally made my day! |
 Tsubasa-Enkou 2009-11-03 . chapter 1Pretty funny. I was cracking up quite a bit. You might want to think of a sequel, since you kind of tease with it but never lead into something more. Just a suggestion (one I hope you take sinc I'd love to read it). |
 Taiyoukai89 2009-10-20 . chapter 1Aw, that was cute. I liked that one. I hope you make another little fluff one like this. |
 irmina 2009-09-12 . chapter 1Totally crack fic! What a pathetic Aido. |
 Tsuki Hitachiin 2009-08-07 . chapter 1Oh. I think you completely killed me, the way you made me laugh xD You are an utterly AMAZING author.
'Attempting to be sober, and therefore trembling slightly with contained mirth, Zero very seriously plucked up one of the cherries that had lodged in his shirt pocket and placed it in the center of the line of whipped cream on Kaname's chest, right over his heart. "D-don't forget your cherry," he said, deadpan except for the tremble in his voice.' Ah...the joy of undisguised humor. *giggles* Still laughing after this long of reading it~
Kaname is so completely innocent, isn't he? '"Okay, we'll do that now. I'll do you later..."' *nods in apparent sincerity...but fails at restraining her laughter* Must...see...that...in action! o.O" Much too tempting, hah. Well, we'll see what happens next shall we? :3
'Well, except for Aido who fumed indignantly, requiring Kain to sit on him, which the other vampire was only too happy to do by this point.' Yay! Kain is sitting on Aido...won't this lead to anything? >:) Haha, I could totally picture the cool and calm "Wild" sitting on hyperactive and VERY messy "Idol-senpai"!
Oh oh oh!! They're going in the shower! *eyes wide, peeking around the corner* I wonder what they're going to do? :33 Ahem, excuse me for a minute. *turns away to hide nosebleed* Okay, that's sorted out! Would I be too presumptuous to ask for the sequel to this? >:3 I can just picture it...*turns away to stop the newly restarted nosebleed* Anywhos, I'm sure you get the point...:)
'There was a clunk and the sound of something dropping into water. "Uh, hey Aido, why is there a lump of ice with an orange in it on the counter and do you care if it falls in the-?" his long-suffering cousin started to inquire, prompting Aido to burst out of the shower.
"No! Don't touch it...!"' *coughs, choking while she attempts to stop laughing like a maniac* Oh, I bet my family thinks I'm crazy. It's all your fault too! You're far too good of an author...ess!
You did an excellent job in this fic! The humor you aimed at was accomplished...much too well! (But that's good, so don't think it's not!) I bow to you :) |
 YuuriCullen 2009-08-04 . chapter 1XD FUNNEST VK CRACKFIC EVER! XD
"NO DON'T TOUCH IT!"XD
KANAME ORANGE...WHAT THE HECK?! XD
THAT WAS SOO FUN...XD I COULD IMAGINE KANAME AND ZERO AND WHIPPED CREAM...OH YES...XD
*DIES*
OH CRAP...XD THERE GOES THE NOSEBLEED...XD |
 BlackVelvetEyes 2009-07-23 . chapter 1Hahahahaha! You deinitely hit the bulls-eye when you aimed for a funny fic! I'm crying from laughing so hard! Excellent work! :]]
BVE♥ |
 fluffychocolate 2009-07-01 . chapter 1ROFLMAO... this made me crack up so many times :)
I mean, of course the possibilities of Zero and Aidou fighting over which way to peel an apple would lead to an utterly hilarious battle. |
 mlpbuttons 2009-06-23 . chapter 1LMAO! Brilliant. Just brilliant. XD |
 xXxStarStrifexXx 2009-06-20 . chapter 1That was absolutely hilarious! Aido is so hilariously childish and poor Kain who always has to look after him...and sit on him! Hehe. I would love of however if you would write the shower scene... I have a strange craving for oranges now and I may have to draw one and call it Kaname [ pity I can't draw :( ] |
 Eyes17k 2009-06-14 . chapter 1Mwahahhahahahahahahah -rolls on the floor- XD XD XD XD XD
I was laughing my lungs out so funny! |
 PandaGaaraInsomniac9 2009-06-07 . chapter 1LULZ. I love this. So much fluff and cuteness and hilarity. Food fights are fun, especially when you have the speed and reflexes of a vampire (which I don't have, obviously, but i suppose they'd be fun).
<3 Panda |
 catlover28 2009-05-06 . chapter 1aw, this fic is so cute. i love z and k in an established relationship, definitely write something alone the lines of this again |
 aisha4senru 2009-04-17 . chapter 1This was so hilarious! I laughed to tears. Really, i think my co-worker thought I lost my mind...hehehe!! It's funny and sweet. It's kinda heartwarming, you know... I also liked the part when Zero and aido were being childish...and yeah...FRIENDS. It's wonderful to think them as friends.
And I found it sweet when Zero tried to not make Kaname lonely...and distant. This was awesome. |
 Miharu-tenshi 2009-04-15 . chapter 1xD that was so awesome!! i laughed so hard when Zero put a cherry on Kaname's chest lol you're very good at humor. xD thanks for this wonderful fic! :D |