ROFL. This story is amazing. xD<3

Great writing.

lol, what was THAT?!

geez, XD - i totally saw it coming, though

and i loved the snarky litle comments at the beginning, when rox and ax are fighting

Should I tell you AGAIN how much I love this?

Because:

A'LDKGHLKG I CAN'T GET OVER IT IT'S SO GREAT.

-cough- I should find you on MSN and gush about it right now. In fact... I think I will. So there. =D

(If I can ever get myself to stop rereading this.)

There's not much I can say about this other than it was really effing hot. We both know that it doesn't do this lovely piece justice and, considering it's about six thousand words, I should be able to come up with something slightly better than that.

But that fact still remains that it was pretty effing hot.

So. Brill! :D

That was...quiet something. Lol, WOW! I have never read something like this before. I mean, that's some triangle isn't it? Loved Axel and Kairi's character and the fight between Axel and Roxas was just awesome! OMG! Axel is some sort of slave to lust isn't he? I mean, he just wantes SEX! No matter who it is, SEX!! LOL! Although, Roxas felt like a anti-social person. The writing style was unique as well. Almost all of it was awesome though, according to me, somewhere something didn't click that much but it was very rare!

See, now, sometimes I wish I didn't know you. Because knowing you just makes reviewing this that much harder. It means it won't be a coherent review at all; it will, instead, be full of me telling you how much I love you and it will have NOTHING TO DO AT ALL WITH THE FIC.

Suffice to say, you are brilliant and if I could fave you all over again I so would but as it is I'll just have to go check every tickbox beneath this here. *sigh*

You win very much for what the world probably knows by now is your OT3. ♥ And while it seems like only Axel was the agressor here, Roxas with Kairi in that very last part - intent on getting his way - was brilliant. Just, yum. Hippy!Kairi and college-dropout!Axel and I-don't-know-what!Roxas was also great. And, haha, to start with? I almost pictured it as a threesome involving Demyx, for some reason. Oops. I have to say my two favourite moments were Axel-and-Kairi-make-out-on-their-first-meeting-across-a-table, and Axel's little "Why the hell does it have to be YOU of all people?" with Roxas.

The fact they switched the review button is retarded, I favorited this. Which works out great, but I wanted to review first.

I see "Hearts" still exists? Man, I love that coffee shop so much.

You, my friend, are great in that you turn the slogan "sharing is caring" and turn it into hot sex. And when that involves Axel/Kairi/Roxas, that is always good.

I loved how nonchalant they were as they went about their debauchery, and the ongoing insults somehow made this especially endearing. Yeah, take note everybody, because this is how to write a AKR correctly.

You just killed my brain and made the world right.

I had no idea that these three could work, but you managed it surprisingly well without slipping on their characterization or your good storytelling. I loved this one. Funny, endearing and.. well, really hot. *cough*

Keep writing!

THAT WAS SO HOT.

I LOVE YOU, YOU SEXY, SEXY BEAST. ♥

Drop dead, douchebag.”
“Oh, fancy alliterations from the Boy Wonder.”

hahahaha funniest part in this story!!

i loved it so very much dude.

So. That was hot. :D I really enjoyed it. I like your narration style. There is something different about it, and I find that I'm pretty addicted to it. :] Great job~