Please let me know if u will be continuing this. I really hope that u will. Please don't abandon this. It's a great story

I'm really liking this story! The sshole part was really funny, I may have to try that sometime. . .

Please update soon!

One peice of advice when it comes to keeping Neji in character; whenever he says something (unless the situation is absolutely serious) have him smirk. That gives you more freedom with words because whatever he says is a result of his amusement. Sorry, don't get mad, I have an obsession with constructive criticism! But I love giving compliments too! This plot is really good so far, and the tickling made my day! I've gotta keep readingnya!

I'm surprised Tenten thought Yasumi was a guy. Women don't judge people by what they hear as men or women often, and Tenten is being too... rude. She's not usually like that, especially not to elder people. Storming into people's houses and yelling "broad" at the supposed help is never a good thing, trust me. (The help is usually the one with power around the house nowadays when it comes to guests.
You made a grammatical error somewhere in the part where Neji throws the bag over his shoulder, watch out for that.

Best of luck on the makings of the next chapter!

i honestly dont carwe what happens as long as TenNeji is involved

Both sound delicious...But I MUCH prefer the sweet lemon 2 a sweetly-sour lime!...Yeesh, Neji's either thick or RETARDED!

So...KibaHina or NaruHina?...I LUV NARUHINA AND SASUSAKU!...Srry, I just wanted 2 scream that...MY FISH DIED! WAH!

First, we have no analyze Neji's attitude! He's not very open, but not too cold. He's kind, but also very intolerant of the things he dislikes. He's not straightforward with his thoughts or feelings, and likes being in control. I think... that's about it. Oh, and he's kind of shy around the subject of women, since he doesn't know how to handle them.

XD

NOW that's it.

I loved it! Neji seems to give in to moment of complete rapture in which his own feelings take over, or he does somethinh senseless. XD Like ticking Tenten, for one thing. XD
Best of luck on the makings of the next chapter!

I would like to see more.

really like it so far, its very funny and cute. Good job. But a little suggestion for the summery, delete the part saying "animals, Neji, animals" It would have pulled me in even without it.

...Okay...The "dream" thing makes me wonder whether she did that on purpose...Hehehe...Neji must b an angry-possessive type...

awesomeness! I hearteded both the slightly perverted Tenten and the Kibaten dream lemon inuenndo! Lol I'm a pervert! '

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