I usually don't like Pokemon but this romance story is actually pretty cool. Keep it up, and keep writing.

Not too orginal, but nothing beats the classics! _ Do write more!

That was great! _ I TOTALLY LOVED IT! _ AAM 4ever! _

That was good! You should make more chapters of it!

he was carrying a pot around?

Cute Cute Cute. *Maura*

Awesome! Loved the ending-Ash using Brock's pot-or whatever it was-was a stroke of genius. More AAMR in the future!