Very nice, good family moment, nice action. Thanks

Awwww, I really, really liked this one.

Well done!

I really like the way you wrote Edmunds wryly polite manner to the rabbits. For your first written fight, you did great! Delightful bit of humour with the rabbits to counterpoint the rawness of the wulf attack. Excellent.

I love this story, it's just perfict for me! Well done.

NarniaQueen

Those poor rabbits x
I hope Ed and Pete made it up to them xL

That was such a cute story ! I really loved it.

I found myself 'Aw ing in some parts, and laughing out loud in others.

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Been on hiatus for months because I changed jobs. Got around reading only because i got badly sick. What a great story to come back to. Feel a lot better now. More fantastic brother fics! Ü

Loved the story! The brother's hero complex and defending each other, the Sisters and sibling bonding. It was done just right I felt. The only thing that bothered me was the language. Otherwise it seemed a fun adventure. I like your idea that the cordial healed them but they were still somewhat stiff and sore.

Lol, "Or were you too unconcious to remember?" Haha, i dont know why, but i really liked that line. ;P

Good work. i liked this chapter, and it rounded it off nicely. Heh, loved how you finished it; with the "Oh, you can help me with the preparations for the winter festival!" Hehehe...

Great work

Love Bundi

This was excellent! Just perfect; the characterization, the fight, the afterwards... Loved Edmund and Peter crashing the Rabbits' tea. Loved how they both blamed themselves. Also thought it was interesting that they were both attacked in the shoulder area... I don't know if that intentional on your part, it's just something I noticed.

Very excellent work.

This is really good! I might just want to say that you should edit your stories before you post them. There are alot of spelling errors. (and I, myself am a truly terrible speller.) It is very good, keep writing.)

oh, it was wonderful!i enjoyed it very much! good characterization, great humour and the sweetest sibling bonding. i love this story so!good work

Ahh I liked this ending chapter, speacially when Peter woke up and was sitting over Ed. Lucy's cold feet and Su's cold hands were amusing too. Always picking on Ed.
Wildfire

VERY nice! Another masterpiece)

i am glad that both peter and edmund are okay. i enjoy peter/edmund brother bonding fanfic fluff. it shows ho strong their bond is between brothers. i loved this fanfic! i hope to see more of your work in the future! )

That was cute! I love how Ed and Peter both blamed themselves. They're so protective. OH, and I love how you write all the characters. You've got them spot on. Great job!