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| Reviews for Time, Space and everything inbetween |
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   she-was-a-rose 2/27/13 . chapter 9Drop bear...Terry Pratchett! |
| she-was-a-rose 2/27/13 . chapter 2 I am enjoying reading this; you weave words like promises and love songs. It's lovely. |
| she-was-a-rose 2/27/13 . chapter 1 AAAAAHHH IS VALA A TIME LORD?! |
| royslady51 11/8/12 . chapter 10 One thing that's driving me wild is you usage of the word 'there', incorrectly...frequently. You've been using the wrong word entirely. The one you need is 'their' and in some cases 'they're'. Correct uses, tenses and grammar...: 'their' is used as a possessive plural. 'they're' is the contracted form of 'they are' as opposed to 'they've' which is the contracted form of 'they have' or 'they'd' which is the contracted form of 'they had'. go there, from there, there is: There indicates a place, placement or motion. re: they had talked a few times about there (their) shared past as hosts even though there(their) experiences had been so different. But mostly it's a really good story. |
| thephoenixandthedragon4ever 6/28/12 . chapter 12 So sad but I hope you wrote a new love for Celesta. |
| thephoenixandthedragon4ever 6/28/12 . chapter 10 Cute but sorry that story is almost at the end. |
| thephoenixandthedragon4ever 6/28/12 . chapter 9 Love it, love it. |
| thephoenixandthedragon4ever 6/28/12 . chapter 8 Love it. |
| thephoenixandthedragon4ever 6/28/12 . chapter 6 Very interesting. |
| thephoenixandthedragon4ever 6/28/12 . chapter 5 So sad. |
| thephoenixandthedragon4ever 6/28/12 . chapter 2 Confused but interested. |
| Arekanderu 5/17/11 . chapter 12 Aww that was sweet! |
| Caryn R 1/21/11 . chapter 12 I loved this story! Thank you! |
| Jonn Wolfe 9/26/10 . chapter 12 That was Gorgeous! |
| MiguelCC51 7/18/10 . chapter 12 That ending was...WOW. Liked how you added Rose at the end there. Nice touch. Those last two line were brilliant, by the way. Just brilliant. |
