|Reviews for Guarding Edward|
| Hypothetical 2/10/09 . chapter 6
Oh... is the stalker Lauren Mallory? I wouldn't have thought she is smart enough to think of something like that!
| kejce 2/10/09 . chapter 6
I love how you are making all of them so intelligent but keeping Emmett into his video games.
Excellent chapter. I had to keep myself from reading ahead to see what was going to happen.
LM - Lauren Mallory?
Excellent ending. I'm definitely looking forward to more, especially the stalkers POV and what the situation is at Jessica's house.
This is a wonderful suspense Fanfic. I am so glad you decided to write it!
| edward-n-bella-fr-eternity1207 2/9/09 . chapter 5
Hm i have no clue how to guess where he has seen her! Well lets hope that Bella won't kill him and end up being his murderer! Wel amazing job update soon!
| Link's Ocarina Babe 2/9/09 . chapter 5
Oh, and yes, I do agree that it gets a bit redundant. However, this was a good chapter that establishes Edward's budding emotions for Bella. If I had to guess, I would think that he saw Bella as he was growing up?
| kejce 2/9/09 . chapter 5
Excellent chapter. It's nice to see things from both perspectives on the first meeting.
I like that from now on all the chapters will move the story forward. As it does tend to get redundant doing the same chapter from different perspectives.
I'm guessing Edward saw Bella in the park she used to jog in ten years ago. Maybe not on the same day that she rescued the abused woman but maybe on a different day.
I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. You're really keeping me guessing as to who the stalker could be. I have several ideas, but I'm waiting for more clues to narrow things down.
| robsmom 2/9/09 . chapter 5
Thank you for the update...
| robsmom 2/9/09 . chapter 4
I have tocompliment you. The story looks like it will be intetresting. It is well written and holds the reader's attention. Please keep up the good work
| Link's Ocarina Babe 2/8/09 . chapter 4
Oh! So cute and delicious is Edward!
| kejce 2/6/09 . chapter 4
Nice chapter. I think you did a really good job with the desensitization. It's not over or underdone. Jasper and Emmett's parts of moving in and keeping her calm were done really well too. It seems Rose was a little forgotten about but it's understandable if she's just there for support.
I enjoyed how Edward looked at Rose first and his eyes just graced over her to fall upon Bella.
I am very interested in the sparks of recognition Edward had when he looked at Bella. I can't wait to see where you go with this.
| edward-n-bella-fr-eternity1207 2/6/09 . chapter 4
Wow this story looks extremely interesting! update real soon I would love to see where you are going with this! please and thank you very very much! Xoxoxoxoxoxo
| kejce 2/5/09 . chapter 3
Beautiful. You've done a great job capturing Bella's emotional state: the confusion, the desire to kill, and the desire not to give into the monster.
I am really enjoying reading this. Definitely looking forward to seeing more.
| kejce 2/5/09 . chapter 2
I really like the twist on this story. I enjoy seeing Edward as Bella's singer and seeing Bella lose control.
I like your portrayal of Alice. She isn't omniscient as is in some other fics. It adds a nice element of mystery.
“Yes, there’s something, but I’m just not getting a good read on it.” I could almost see Alice’s face in my mind, her pixie nose scrunched up, her brow furrowed in thought.
I think those are wonderful lines. You as a reader can see Alice's frustration but yet it still feels like it's going to be alright even though she can't see.
I think the scene in the concert hall was handled beautifully. I felt like I could hear the music as though I was there. The story flows well, has good pacing, and keeps the reader interested.
| kejce 2/5/09 . chapter 1
I really enjoyed how this started out dark and delved into a subject that is not often discussed, only to turn into something lighthearted and fun.
The transition from such a delicate subject to something more light was very well done. It didn't feel rushed or inappropriate. It flowed very nicely.
It's off to a good start. It's captivating and draws you in. I'm looking forward to seeing more.
| Link's Ocarina Babe 2/2/09 . chapter 3
Hm. Vampire Bella makes for interesting reading material. I am enjoying this very much so far.
| Noble Korhedron 1/30/09 . chapter 2
Woah! That was.. weird! Good, but weird! I'm goin' to say B- for this one, but keep it up... Looks like it could get interesting... Have an alert for the next Ch.!