OH NOES! MEL! :'(

I thought of the song "Hear You Me" by Jimmy Eats World when I was reading the last few sentances. It's a good song :D You should check it out!

oh wow this really had me pulled in! i hope you add more chapters! i really need to know what is going to happen. it has a good amount of suspense in it. not too much but not too little. you did a great job

OMG is "he" Vaith?

Please update soon!

what the hell? NO! write more!

cliffhanger much?

more more!

god story by the way!

oh. You should right more deffinatly... i love MagicalxMiracle and wanted to find a good story. Please continue;P

aw,this is so sad!me no liky!haha,no i do,its just so deserve to be together!hee hee!i did enjoy this though,very well written.

willow

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Dear Author, ;)

I love this story the ending almost made me cry, hope you will be writing more stories

yours SINCERLY

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