great fic. update soon ^_^ Ja.

Wow. Very nicely done. It's always interesting to explore the relationships between the five pilots.

This gets better and better every chapter. I think I've already said every good thing I can about you and your writing style, that just emphasizes so much and makes the reading even better.

...the story is still a bit confusing but I really like it! Your style is always a good read. Who are you going to do next?

Interesting. In fact, very different from any other I have read. Will enjoy reading more. ^_^

Your words are so freaking descriptive and beautiful! You can't help but read it. The way you present everything is great. The plot, the characterization, the background story, the emotion...its all written beautifully.

This line “I already know all the endings. Sometimes it’s nice just to see the beginnings.”Was perfect. I really like how you are showing us the layers of Duo (its something special and unique), as well as the other pilots.

loved it.

Man I'm totally in love with this and its just the first chapter. I love the supernatural aspect of it and the characterization you have presented. I'm loving the world you have portrayed here and I love Duo's comments. So funny. I'm glad I stumbled upon this, because I can see its going to be one of my favorite stories.

This story is so amazing! It is at once profound, and at the same time heart-warmingly disturbing. I love the idea that it takes five souls to balance each other out. My only question is, did the scientists know about the boys "powers" when they recruited them? Because that would be an interesting perspective- on how they selected their individual candidates...and it would be wonderful, of course, to someday see more of how they became an integrated group. *gives puppy eyes* That aside, a lovely bit of writing.

love it...

awesome start and I love the second chapter. Please continue soon.

i like them.

I must say, I do love your GW stories. Especially because, unlike so many authors, you don't forget that Quatre is a badass in his own right. I heart badass Quatre.

You have a wonderful way with words... I adore this chapter, please update. :)

More please! I like the mix of supernatural and science and your Duo is spot on!