Nice. I think Maul should turn light, become a Master, and train Anakin. Continue soon.

Well I sure would like to know how this is going to end. You brought my two faforite SW characters together so no matter how things are going to end, I'll be reading this story. But I hope Maul can get peace with both the sets of memories and choose which side he's on. (though I'm hoping he'll continues working with Qui-gon of course :D ).

Thanks for the story so far, and I hope you'll update soon.

yay you posted! ^_^ plz post again soon

poor ciaran. he's so lost righht now. and what sucks is he really doesn't have any other name... not that i'm aware of anyway. so sad. i hope that qui'gon finds him before Windu or one of the others, Windu would probably just kill him on sight.

yay! i am so happy to see this! darth maul is amazing as always and you do such a good job of writing him!

You have just made my already excellent day perfect with this chapter ^_^

Things seem to be growing steadily more dangerous. Sidious is getting almost.. desperate to see results. Ciaràn is starting to remember things - even if he doesn't know yet what it is. And the Jedi may just have the location of the Sith... though I doubt it'll be the final confrontation just yet.

Eager for more! Keep up the fantastic way in which you narrate :D

Another excellent, detailed chapter ^_^

Those darned Jedi are so narrowed minded sometimes, it really annoys me.

Eager to see what Dooku and Sidious will try next. Keep it up ^_^

yay new chapter. i'm really enjoying this story.

Great job with this story, I think that you've described Maul's personality very well throughout the story! The bit you wrote about Qui-Gon getting scared when Maul aimed a fake punch at him was very well done. Thank you for posting this fic! ^_^

I like it.

Oh, Qui-gon...PAY ATTENTION, DANG IT! It is incredible how many things characters could avoid if they would just pay attention! The bad guys give you hints! You are supposed to be able to pick up on these things! Oy...
Good chapter! I can't wait to see where you decide to take this story!
Keeper-of-the-Cheese

Amen, Qui-Gon, Amen. That is it. Distrust the troll. Distrust the troll.

Good chapter. I love how the Jedi Council is so good at alienating the Jedi and pushing them over to the Sith's Cause. Yeah, I can not wait for the arrival of Lord Tyrannus.

Uhm, can I say that I despise Yoda, like more than any other Jedi? I mean, what the hell is his problem? First he rapes Maul's mind, then he implants a memory where he is intentionally cruel to a baby, and forces the baby to destroy a small toy, in order to teach a lesson about attachment.

Yeah... Good job of the Evil Yodaness. You are getting him down good.

Though I hope there is hell to pay when Sidious finds out what they did to Maul. (Crosses fingers)

I can't believe I am the only reviewer so far (though hopefully more will come to see my point of view) that objects to the Jedi and the Demon Troll (Yoda) raping Darth Maul's mind. Am I seriously the only person who thinks that thid is WRONG? If so, then I hope every Jedi (except Anakin) burns in Jedi Hell. And just for good measure, Damn the Jedi Council for what they are doing to Maul and what they did to Darth Revan. Self righteous bastards...

Though don't get me wrong, you are doing an excellent job writing the story. I just hope you will indulge this Sith Lord Fan and kill most of the Jedi in revenge for the raping of Maul's mind.

Bwahahaha!! He's so evil!...Which, ya know, is good, seeing as he is that bad guy. ;} I'm really enjoying this! We need more good Darth Maul fics out there...Keep up the good work!
Keeper-of-the-Cheese