This was brilliant. Very well written, I'm adding it to my favourites

Wow, I am blown away. This poetry is very detailed. I enjoyed it very much. Go ahead and check out my stories!

Miller

wow great poem x

Very good! This is not only original, it written so good.

Great fanfic

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J.D

I liked it. It had a nice flow. I wonder what it would sound like to some music.

you have such great vocabulary. there is no way you're 14, and i really like the way that your writing flows together. so talented!

AND YOU CAN WRITE POETRY! DAMN YOU'RE GOOD

This was really good. I like the way you put a hook (What have you done?)

wow totally enjoyed it. Hope for more. Check out my new story it's going to be up in less than an hour.

Thanks again for a great chapter.

That is a great poem. It flows and and goes perfectly with the story. I love it! I hope you write more!