Your descriptions were perfect; I literally was shivering as I read this, and it's July. Great story.

Such a well written story. You obviously did a lot of research and it shows in the quality of the writing. I found myself feeling like I was being crushed and frozen along with poor Shep.

I have a near hysterical reaction to having my arms pinned, so it made for some uncomfortable reading, but in a good way.

Lovely Shepwhump.

:-)
-LilRicki (aka Pansy Chubb)

Great fic!

Very good story. I like all the drama of the medical procedures.

Thank you.

Excellent. Wonderful Shep whump and very realistic. Your medical research paid off and it's nice to see the medical stuff so accurate. I really felt John's decline here and felt the tension. My only nitpick was Rodney. He really irritated me at times.

You have done yourself proud, Kristen9. This was whump at its delicious best! And the opening to the story was so pretty until it hit me that Shep was about to crash! Great contrast there.

The tension added to the clock ticking down, particularly the way Rodney was coping (or not!) was painfully palpable and then the pace heated up even more once the jumper had been found.

This was an exhausting journey in freezing conditions and I loved every second of it!

O, thanks for this. I love a bit of John whump. Great story.

Only you could make me feel as though I'm freezing to death while sitting in a toasty warm room under a comforter. Your imagery of the ice shards, the snow, the weather, and John's body's reaction to them was fantastic. You are the wizard of whump. When you whump Sheppard I feel as though I'm the one being pummeled and tossed within an inch of my life. This was a great fic and I really, Really, REALLY enjoyed it. Write on!

Wow! I absolutely adored this! As someone who loves medical detail and who, well, gets a bit irritated when things are medically inaccurate, well, this story was just damn perfect! The medical details were so wonderfully researched and I just thought they fitted in so well with the story. Ok, they made me sigh in delirious pleasure! Yes, I'm weird, but you already knew that!

I loved the team's concern for Sheppard;, their determination to find him before it was too late. I love the care Carson gave Sheppard; he's just the best doctor, isn't he? And McKay's constant questioning of Carson was so good.

This goes straight to my favourites. One thing though. This was so well done that I actually started to feel really cold when reading it! Your descriptions were fantastic. Well done! :)

This was so good. I loved the detail and 'feel'. It had me on the edge of my seat more than once. I thought it was great that McKay would try to get through to John using Comic Book hereos.
I personally vote for Gambit when it comes to the hair but maybe the attitude too.
Great Job can't wait to see what you do next

You've done it again! That was awesome! I am so excited whenever I see a story with your name attached. Everything you write is of the highest quality. I can really hear their voices clear as day. I look forward to more...hopefully soon? God bless you.

Enjoyed it :-)

Ooh, this was nice. :) I loved Shep's incoherent-ness. Very realisitic. Thank you for sharing! :)

wow talk about some real bad luck. but leave it to the team to be there to pull him back :)