God, I thought they were dead for sure! Sawyer's description was kind of funny, though. Thank god for the happy ending!

Wow that was great! I don't think I have read it before! I'm one of the few remaining jacketeers, I have a couple of jacket links in my profile if you want to check them out ;) I hope you write some more :D

I really liked this story. I liked the concept, it's very 'Ben' to put them out to sea like that, to find the loopholes in their request. I also loved the scene where Jack found the gun. Instantly, my thoughts went to Pirates of the Caribbean (strange thought train...), where Jack Sparrow was left with one bullet to kill himself. I instantly thought that that was the purpose, and then Jack thought of using it on the sharks. I like when stories surprise me.

Great job!

I knew this from the lostforum and I'm glad you gave it here.
I like this story, it's a great idea. It is dramatic, but it has a happy end. :)