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Unlulzworthy
2009-01-29 . chapter 1
:3 Loved it. Isn't season five so great? 8D CHARLIE! He looks like a little hobbit, with all that curly hair. -giggle-

Anyway, as I've said, this was lovely. Short and sweet, and you've gotta love Desmond! (Sorry, I'm still kind of on a high from last night; I'm not usually this...high-strung.)

[He’d waited for too damn long, counted down repetitions of 108 minutes for aeons until salvation came in the form of one plane crash.]

A crash that he caused. -grin-

As for feedback, I think Des might have been a little more worried about Penny than just impatient, and, technically, I don't think "luv" is a word, but that's okay. ;) Write more!
Miss Riku
2009-01-29 . chapter 1
I thought it was so sweet how they names they're kid Charlie. I was like "aw you kidding? thats amazing" I miss Charlie :( The story was excellent, FYI. Yey for Charlie Hume!!
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