Interestin'...kinda out-of-sync with the irreverence that the film swam in, but good stuff nonetheless. I also felt that this particular piece of the storyline was a good point of elaboration. Nice job!

Very nice. Highly enjoyable. Well written, and the characters were for the most part correct as well. I hope that there would be some kind of a continuation to this, because it sounds like it could be the great make for a story. Not that this one wasn't satisfying in length, I just wish for more!

Hey this story is good. Keep on writing

Awww... how cute...

Great story! I wish there was more though...

I love it! Please write a sequel! I love the pairing of Loki and Bethany! Good coice at naming Bethany's daughter Elizabeth, I think that is what she would be named in a sequel cause as you probobly know it means "Gift From God" Nice job! Sequel!

I like it, but what happened to Jay and Silent Bob. I always imigined them (at least Bob) staying with Bethany. All in all it was good.

I love this fic! Dude, I think you've outdone yourself this time. Loki is the best character! Gotta love Matt Damon.

Why Matt kill Ben? Why Ben mean? Gryafc GRfars4iuou jyrsfnx?

you've killed my fave character in the movie. *shruggs* No that it matters.. still good story you've got there.:D