I also think you need to work on the endings a little bit. I'm not saying it was bad but I think it should be better. It's good to have a cliff hanger though, I like that.

This was a really good story and sequel. I really hope you make another part to this story.

Wow, so Fox is officially 'dead'. Seems like Fox/Lisitza is having a bit of a rough go with all the media hounds. I look forward to reading more of this story in the future; keep up the good work!

Nicely written space battle. Fox seems to be carving out a decent niche for him/herself as Lisitza, but I wonder when he'll start making progress on recovering his original appearance.

Haha, that was great!

Just started to read the series; you're doing a very good job as far as I can see. Fox's transformation is definitely taking its toll, but she(he?) seems to be taking things well enough, I suppose. You do a pretty good job with descriptions of space battles; something which eludes me, so oodles of respect there. Keep up the good work!

This fic remains in it's goodness. XD

I really like how this flows, it's proving to be a good fic, indeed. :)

still good.

That was a pretty good read, actually; I had no idea that General Pepper was such a kind person, err... anthro. Please continue!

Neat chapter, what with Fox/Lisitza and General Pepper ironing out the fictitious background for Lisitza. I really am curious about where you take things from here.

YaY! New update!

Ooh, the sequel is finally out!
Yeah, I can imagine the difficulties Fox/Lisitza would have back on Corneria. It would be pretty rough when things that are supposed to be immutable suddenly get turned around 180 degrees. I can't wait to see where you go with this story.

Im happy to see a sequel.:)