Nice. Now, I don't know if you're looking for tips, but if you are, here's a coin for your hat. However, you do not by anymeans have to use it. I was thinking along the lines of Snape taking a sudden interest in the situation. Maybe, use that as a way to get them together. Remus ends up sleeping with Snape, and Sirius could take a sudden interest. Perhaps, get mad, but if that suggestion agrees, don't forget you have a plot going on here. It's very good so far, and don't drop that on my acount.

Such a good story.I hope you decide to pair Sirius and Remus and not let Remus all alone (*sob*). Sory I can't help you for the fic, but I sympatize since I have the same problem myself. please do write more.

Hey girl!

Finally, i see you've updated! i've been waiting for this for a long long time. btw, i love your story!

xxx lady aurian

Oh please, please continue this! *watery eyes* I want them to be happy! It's so sad now, I want to cry... poor Remus... *cries* Your writing is fantastic, by the way- you can reach out and touch the feelings, almost. _

Oh... poor Remus... no! you can't do this to him! ahhhhh... evil kid!

Ha. James is an idiot. But Sirius is being mean! I know it's not his fault, but still! Ugh, irritating computer is being icky. Do you see how all of my literacy slowly slips away from me? It's quite bad. Anyway, write more soon. Gela

Interesting. I'd really like to see where this is going. I hope Remus ends up with Sirius. And get rid of that 'kid'. He irritates me,and anyway, Moony and Padfoot deserve each other.

Ahh! I love it, yet at the same time, it's very painful to read, and I hate it. But it's marvelous, I like Snape's sudden desire to help, lot's of ways to interpret that.

Wow dude...Intense. Keep going

What can I say, it's cute (but a little sad) I hope that you will continue it. I mus say it is a little diffrent having Sirius as the one being fought over and I honestly don't have a prefrence over whom he ends up with.

I like it so far!