   EriksKitty 9/23/11 . chapter 5*blink* That's it? Um, where's the rest? This is nicely set up, well written, a unique plot. When will you continue it? Kitty -.- |
| Megan McPherson 1/19/02 . chapter 5 That was great. Who's the girl? Plz e-mail me when you post chapter 6.
Thx |
| Confuzzler 12/18/01 . chapter 5 Very good story... write some more! |
| Sophie W 12/8/01 . chapter 4 More Please |
| Tia'RaHu 12/8/01 . chapter 4 This is an excellently written and interesting story although I do wish the chapters were a bit longer! More soon please? |
| aly 12/5/01 . chapter 2 oh wow wot acool and fab fic please finish it as im dieing 2 now wot happans next |
| lizza 12/5/01 . chapter 2 you write well
can you write my english essay 4 me (only joking) |
| Becca Stareyes too lazy to sign in 12/5/01 . chapter 2 Not bad, not bad. But short. Write more. |
| Anne Goshawk 12/4/01 . chapter 1 OMG! Don't leave me hanging! Write! Please! |
| majiklmoon 12/4/01 . chapter 1 nice start...i'd like to see more please |
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