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Reviews for: Concealed Heart
RILEYisLOVE
2009-12-06 . chapter 1
aww this is good! you portrayed the romantic light between the two pokemon without overdoing it and making it seem ridiculous! adding it to my faves :)
InfernoAngelofFlare
2009-11-08 . chapter 1
That is just overwelmingly ADORABLE! I was totally geeking out like Latias was! THEY ARE SO CUTE TOGETHER! at the end I almost expected them to kiss! I was like, "aw man..." D: but E! TOO CUTE! sorry for the caps ^^; but it's TOO CUTE! *squealing with over reactive glee*
Kap487
2009-07-30 . chapter 1
Pure hilariousness.
ArmoredSoul
2009-06-03 . chapter 1
Having an epic "Aw~!" moment over her.
Spectacularly well written as well!
Grumpy Old Diamond
2009-05-22 . chapter 1
You are very good at writing. I can't say that I liked the subject matter in this one, but I think I'll check out some of your other fics just to be sure. One thing though--the way you had Mesprit act really caught my attention. When you said the bit about spending too much time around Azelf, it reminded me of a theory that I sometimes try out when rollplaying with my friend. That is part of the reason I want to read more-- that and the fact that you are a great auther!
DCFG
2009-05-01 . chapter 1
I can't even /tell/ you how amazing that story was. You have amazing writing ability, and this couple, even if I have just discovered it, is already close to my heart. A big thanks goes to this story. Great characterization, and I pictured all of their personalities exactly how you set them. I'm not a big Pokemon fanfiction reader, but this story has drawn me in.

A good length, and a good ending. Not too cliché, either. C:

I hope to see more from you!
Feed Meh Bacon
2009-02-09 . chapter 1
awwl!! how cutee. keep up the good work, this story was a nice read
Mechagodzilla128
2009-02-05 . chapter 1
Nice job.
Attila12
2009-01-31 . chapter 1
Haha, that's cute. Mew, Latias and Giratina could start a business. Legendary Match-Makers R Us! ^^

Attila
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