Wow. I really want you guys to continue this fiction. I mean I started reading it months ago but sadly I have yet to see updates.


I love your work and have been reading Detective Fiction. I hope in a way this is sort of like Poison Apple.

I want to see what L does to Light. He seems pissed.

Right now I'm hooked to all your Death Note fics (starting from Poison Apple, and each one of them ROCK!). Please please please update! It's been a while :)I love your writing style and the way you portray L...he's my fav character and reading your fics is like watching the anime/manga all over again XDXD

Please... Update.
You two are among the best writers here at Fanfiction, and definitely the best in the Death Note section. I have greatly enjoyed reading your work, and I look forward to updates of this story particularly. It's wild, it's unpredictable (especially the spelling of two-word phrase "thank you")... I like that in a story. I like not quite knowing how the chapter is going to end, or what exactly is to occur next. L is more... disheveled than previously seen in Death Note canon. By putting the two main characters in an unrestrained situation (outside the wrath of rules, family, etc.), a sort of freedom has come with the plot of this story. At five chapters, I can tell this will be unlike much of what we as audience members have been reading here at Fanfiction...
I'll be waiting.
Don't keep me long. ;P

3 months?!! It's been 5! D: Anywho, since I just found out about this story today, I can't really complain. As long as it's not abandoned. 'Cause I like your L and Kira's Army.

Interesting story so far. Misa is well-meaning, obviously, but if L was a little less noble and pure (note sarcasm there; I realize he's probably just squeamish) Light would be dead. Really dead. Like, one of his victims dead. Except spine snapping by best/only friend/enemy= more painful than heart attack. Prolly. Never experienced either so just a guess. Hope you continue this, the reactions of all the characters to this break-in should be extremely interesting.

adkfjljwks. I NEED MOAR. This fic has become my new fix. Dx

As per usual, the writing is beautiful, the characters are engaging and in character, and the plot - dear god the PLOT - is breathtaking. So seriously, UPDATE THIS !! ;A; please?

Love it..That's all I can say..

I hope you will upload the next chapter soon! It's a fuckin' good story! God, you are great!

"And the game had become Russian Roulette, and neither of them knew where the bullet was hidden—

Oh, Light had thought he’d known all along, being the one to load the gun and begin the bet; but L was smiling as he handed him the gun, and he found that he didn’t know after all.

He was afraid, and L fucking well knew it."

These sentences are describing the whole Death Note in the most perfect way I've ever seen. This story is good.

awesomeness!
I cant wait for the next chapter!

UPDATE SOON PLEASE! L IS SO AMAZINGLY BADASS! He's a total jerk but I love him because you're the only person that can write him in such a way. Like in Poison Apple and Whisper too.

Bravo. You girls are AMAZING! :) ♥♥

I am in love with your L. He is both the meanest and sexiest L I have seen. I wandered over here after reading "Whisper" and although I'm a perv that prefers the M stuff, I'm certainly gonna keep reading on for more of your wonderful L.

Who else is in the building with Watari and has L and Light knows what happening?

Wow! What a cliffhanger, lol ^^ I wanna see the reactions of the Kira fanatics (so to speak =P) when they found out that 'Kira' and L aren't in the headquarters. =) So far this series is going great can't wait to read more!

Have fun writing love KK xx

you two are magical.

omg that was an awesome chappie-all of them are! please hurry up and UPDATE!