I love it. Please update soon.

Please do not reply to this.

You still write in a mundane process. Just all talk, hardly any interaction. You do say you are improoving, but still, there is some room for improovment. Try reading a novel or other people's fanfictions ot get an idea how to improove your works.

Great chapter. Please update soon.

lol omg for a k story it has so much death but i had a grey kitten called smokey too lol and i feel so bad for stephanie

we got a new chapter! Are we gonna get anymore? *Sits and waits*

Unblock me from AIM if you did. It is kinda rude to block people when they wanna help.

WHilest this story is an improovement from your other works; there are still some minor errors. The grammar is good; you are improoving on that. The only peeve there is is how the characters are so emotionless when they speak. You end a sentance when someone speaks with a comma, unless they are exclaiming or asking a question. If someone is sad... try adding ' ... ' to show emotion. Everyone seems to act very robotic in here.

If you aren't sure what or how to use stuff in a sentance, ask. Don't be afraid.

This is alot better than how you use to write. You acculty added alot of detail to keep the reader intrested in more.