 agentpiperh 2009-12-14 . chapter 3Hey, have you watched the FOX TV show "Bones"? It's about foresic anthropologist Dr. Temperance "Bones" Brennan (Emily Deschanel) and her team, plus FBI liason Seely Booth (David Boreanaz) and the cases they work. It's based on the book series written by Kathy Reichs. As a foresic anthropology major, you'll probably enjoy it. |
 agentpiperh 2009-12-14 . chapter 2great stuff, but Bethesda is a hospital, not a prison. |
 Qoheleth 2009-10-24 . chapter 1Dear Nerwen:
The chapter itself I can take or leave alone, but the chapter *title* is excellent. My compliments.
Sincerely,
Qoheleth |
 tiva2121 2009-10-21 . chapter 1 hey love it so far and foof is awsome
ncis 4 ever- tiva2121 |
 corruptone 2009-10-16 . chapter 5I really, really, really (really) liked this fic.
You kept the characters pretty much in canon, I liked how you write, I liked the story and I like how you did your own interpretation of that poor woman's case.
I also liked how it was mainly a case fic but revolved around a Tiva relationship, so we still got what we liked (TIVA!) but it was as if we were just watching another episode.
Brilliant writing, thanks for filling in a boring evening! |
 OMG Im turning TIVA!!!! 2009-10-11 . chapter 5 Hey I liked this story and Im glad you could find a little justice in your own way. Some of the parts were a little off cannon but not much and most of it was spot on! Well done on this story you have tallent. |
 Midnighter's Dream-Xx 2009-10-11 . chapter 5there's nothing i can say about it except for I LOVE IT!! i cant believe you wrote about her! when i heard about Maria's murder i was like what?! that jerk!!
this is SO GOING ON FAVES!! FREAKIN LOVE IT! |
 strictlysuperb 2009-10-11 . chapter 5wow - really good please continue in other stories - sequels etc & i can't believe that it really happened I feel so sorry for you to know someone who this has actally happened to if only Team Gibbs were real then the bastard wouldn't have made it to mexico |
 Dancing Mystical Kat 2009-10-09 . chapter 5This was beautiful. You did so well with the characters, keeping them very close to who they actually are on the show. I appreciate that a lot.
I really love this story, and I'd love to see you write more of it. |
 Aurelie G 2009-10-07 . chapter 1please go on ! |
 Sbteja 2009-10-06 . chapter 5Nice. I liked this ending, and I must admit, the wait was worth it. Of course, there is the small OOC matter, I mean, when does Gibbs smile? Haha, I'm only joking. But Tony and Ziva are a bit out of character, but then again, when is a prengant Ziva in character? And because Ziva would never be pregnant, ho would we know how Tony would truly react? So, for venturing into he unknown of NCIS Tiva fanfiction stories, and succeeding, I applaud you. And I really like the reason for writing this, it was very sweet. I cannot wait for the continuation of this!
~Sbteja |
 zatl 2009-10-05 . chapter 5aw. this was cute. :) and I love how you made it an NCIS version of a real story.
cute and creative. ;) |
 zatl 2009-10-05 . chapter 1a foof? haha. I'm going to start calling them that from now on. :P |
 Always a Marine 2009-10-05 . chapter 1This story is really good but Corporal isn't an officer rank so a Corporal can't be someone's CO. Sorry, don't mean to be pedantic. |
 It'sMyFavoriteSong 2009-10-05 . chapter 1really good so far, and im about to read the rest, but i just wanted to say that i love the "foof" thing at the end. it really just made my day :) |