 Arashi-No-Shadow 2009-11-27 . chapter 1good story, Just one thing, were the ankle cuffs majic? lol
cause they dissapeared at the end. lol, I thought I'd just point that out, Don't mean to sound rude. lol XD loved the story though. |
 gummybearluvr 2009-03-23 . chapter 1 eh xD that was so hot! |
 Anihihi 2009-03-08 . chapter 1Ehh I tried to read it, this is like the second Kiba x Naruto I read (doesn't seem right, sorry...)
But it's your taste so I'm not not gonna complain about the pairing, just wanted to try something else than SasuNaruSasu... (yeah it gets boring...)
I have to say one thing though. It's kinda weird when they use the sufix (-kun) at the end of their names. Makes it a bit OOC in my opinion. All in all, it's well-written:) |
 Indie-Surfer Takeru 2009-02-12 . chapter 1hot! |
 Kurinoh's Book 2009-02-05 . chapter 1Nice ;) |
 LemonadeLeigh 2009-02-05 . chapter 1Omg, that was an amazing story
just one big heap of lemon YAY
thanks for this
but one thing use different words other than baby, babe and manhood rofl
anyway cant wait for more stories
cya x |
 lord kiras hand 2009-01-29 . chapter 1wow...just wow...i luved it! keep writing. |