 DisforDasey 2009-03-20 . chapter 1Wow, I never really thought of Nally before but after reading this I kind of like them together!!
Hehehe, the 'blind date fiasco'. Teehee. I like that!
Ahaha and I love how everybody (in the M/V house) was treating Sally pretty much the exact opposite of how they used to treat her.
I never really liked Sally when she was with Derek, but I think that's just because she's not Casey. :D It's the same reason I didn't like Sam and Casey, Derek andd Kendra etc.
But Sally's kind of cool when you put her with other people!!
Thanks for writing :D |
 LyraGW 2009-02-06 . chapter 1 Wow Symone, that was amazing !! :D
I really couldn't have asked for something better. And you know, I didn't have a precise idea in mind. Besides, it wouldn't have been that cool !
I love how you made them recognize eachother and bring old stories back. It really felt like they hadn't seen eachother since the blind date, like average (older) highschool teens (used to). You made it work, even if the characters don't have any real story together.
Loved the Dasey touch too ! Actually, when I was reading it, I suddenly felt like I was judging them, from another point of view, Sally's. And they seemed kinda selfish, or something like that.
Also, poor Patrick ! He still isn't over her ! lol ! ;)
Loved it hun !! Thanks for making it *hugs*
Hope u'll like ur vid when I finally finish it ^^ |
 bsloths 2009-01-30 . chapter 1You did such a great job with Nally, Symone! I definitely like them as a couple, and the way you brought them together again was really cool. It's such a shame the Venturis turned on her like that, but I guess it's necessary - how else could they see it, really? Of course she's going to look like the jealous ex. Anyway, this was great!! |
 Super Reader 2009-01-30 . chapter 1I thought it was adorable. I've have never ever thought of Nally before, but now it seems strangely alluring. If Nally starts taking over LwD we'll know who to thank. :D
I can't think of any criticism, but there was one part where you said 'know' instead of 'no'. 'Especially since know one knew her story.' But that's no big deal. I've done that a million times.
Nice job, Symone. :) |
 Catspaw Blackgaard 2009-01-29 . chapter 1Interesting story! It isn't a standard pairing, but it was an intriguing story of how things could turn out in the future for some characters. I can see the pairing working in your story, though I certainly never would have thought of it myself! :) |
 Allybooklover6677 2009-01-29 . chapter 1NALLY!
Hehe, this was really well written, with an interesting and unique plot! I loved it! |
 xXTwilight PrincessXx 2009-01-29 . chapter 1Oh, I really liked it! I quite enjoy this couple. They seem like they would be adorabley(Is that a word? Lol) sweet together. Anyway, I really liked this fic! :D
Emmy^_^ |
 pheobe p. 2009-01-29 . chapter 1I love the way you slowly reveal the drama -- we get to know Sally first so we don't hate her for trying to come between derek and casey.
Noel and Sally make a lot of sense. great job
:) pheobe |
 Frogster 2009-01-29 . chapter 1That was good! Nally is a different matchup--I can honestly say that I'd never heard of it before reading this. But, I kinda like it. Sally's okay, in her way (I'll never forget how she pied Derek in the face. That was awesome!), and Noel's a sweetheart. Does the drama happen at the end of this season, or did you just make it up? The last episode I saw was Tuesday Night Fever--where I am, Disney just likes to mess with the show's line-up.
I wish you'd do another one-shot soon! :D |
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