Great story!

You got Pelleas in character.

Keep up the great work!

Even though I'm not really that fond of the pairing, I decided to give it a go and I really liked this fic.
I think that your characterisation of Pelleas is very accurate, and I liked the way you protrayed his apathetic wallowing in self pity. Usually, it's a fine balance to get this right, and you succeeded at this well. Pelleas' predicament at being lost in his own thoughts remain believable throughout, and your protrayal of him stayed true to his character.
I also liked the way in which this story stayed true to the canon events of the game, and took into account the problems that pelleas faced as a result of being de-throned, and how he must deal with the decisions he took when he was king.

I liked the way that Micaiah continues to believe in Pelleas, and I think that this gives her a real humanity, as she is the only one that seems able to forgive him for his mistakes.
I also found the ending to be a nice way to finish this fic, as the happy ending held a degree of uncertainty, which I think shows that Pelleas is still hesitant to commit himself to believe in their future.

Overall, an excellent piece of work! _