Awwww Very , Very , Sweet , Love This Story , Well Done And Thanks .

Oh , Brilliant , Brilliant Chapter , Well Done And Thanks .

Awwww Sweet Chapter , Well Done And Thanks .

HaHa Lol , Love The First Chapter , Well Done And Thanks .

loved it! u should write a sequal!

who is Martha Milligan? and why doesn't jack just contact the dr.? or at least threaten U.N.I.T. with the fact that he knows th dr. and Martha Jones would help jack! also he could always call in the other CHILDREN OF TIME. Plus all he'd have to do is show his TARDIS KEY!

So why not just do somthing like that? i'm NOT critisixeing i'm just courius!

Love Ianto and Jack and the idea of them having children love all the characters and like that they all have their own personallity this is a great fanfiction and a brilliant second story continuing from life as a torchwood child love both stories :D

wow! Tanwen is growing up so fast. well thats just sort of how it goes on fanfic. this is awesome!

Aww! Dayton and Noah are so cute together! Haha, I loved the part when everyone in the Hub was like "Finally!" when Noah and Dayton asked Jack and Ianto's permission to date. )

Sorry, I had to print this chapter and read it on-the-go the other day and I completely forgot to leave a review. Anyway, I adored this story! It was so exciting and humorous all through and I really enjoyed reading it. I am glad that Dayton ended up with Noah and that he was not a spy knowingly. Thanks for such a brilliant story and please write more Children of Torchwood AU stories soon!

yay ! ! ! i love happy endings. this was a beautiful story and you always had cliff hangers which had me on the edge of my seat. well done

Wonderful. I'm so glad everything worked out and that UNIT is coming back around to where it should be

Gx

LOVED! I want more in the Children of Torchwood 'verse! Please? *gives puppy dog eyes* I'll give you a cookie ...

Anna.x.(:

Oh my god! I am in shock. Brilliant chapter! It was really funny at the beginning and I was shocked at the ending. Really can't wait for the last chapter now! Also please write more Children of Torchwood AU stories soon! I really love reading them.

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NO! I liked him. I don't think he was a spy. She'll come round, won't she? Please, please; please, please, please!

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So. Shocked.

Anna.x.O: