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The Confused One
2009-05-31 . chapter 2
Very interesting take. I mean, there's always that moment. You feel it day in and day out, but there's a time when you just...know. You can finally see it. I love that they're in this holding pattern. They're afraid to break the spell, to just say the words. :) I'm so glad they said them though at the end. :) Now they can be happy. LOL Yes, as far as I'm concerned, they now lived happily ever after, forever.
Olivia44
2009-04-17 . chapter 2
Good continuation of the prologue. Bobby doesn't take the first step out of fear that he might screw up and Alex doesn't because she fears being failed and heart broken again.

Aw, their evening together was so cute! They were so familiar with each other, so in tune.

Nice way how they adressed their little "problem". It's not more than a formality. They only confirm what they both already know, being assured by the evening / night together that they can deal with it.
Olivia44
2009-04-17 . chapter 1
Aw, how cute! You really caught them well, especially Bobby. It'd be just so typical for him. It awesome concerning the shortness of this one.
The Mominator
2009-02-01 . chapter 2
Cute, have another story in the works after Alex left?
DixieH
2009-01-30 . chapter 2
Loved it! - Dix.
Humor In A Bittersweet Life
2009-01-29 . chapter 2
So very nice ... I guess she felt it needed to be said or she felt he needed to hear the words not just see it in her eyes.
Sweet.
B R Cary
2009-01-29 . chapter 1
Cute story. I would like to see what happens after Alex left.
Kyasurin-chan
2009-01-29 . chapter 2
Oh, wow! I wish my first G/E fic were this good! (Actually, my fics kinda suck) Anyways, this is utterly adorable! I LOVE IT! I especially love how Eames just casually turns around and admits her love for him. It's like it's no big deal. Almost like she turned around and said "Oh, by the way, it's raining so you should bring an umbrella." That made me happy. As did the mental image of Bobby reading an article on homeless dogs in Kentucky. Lol. (BTW, I think this is the longest review I've ever given anyone...)
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