Well done! An excellent piece of work. I love the way you write the ship.

*sniff* *siff* It's perfect! and so sweet


NS

that was good!! please continue! :)

That was an excellent fic. A little unfinished though.

'Sighing, Tony let his eyes flick to the other desk in the squadroom before quickly moving his attention to his hands. He couldn’t think about her…' - I liked this image of Tony and the depth of feeling you gave to him. Nicely done.

Oh my gosh I love the song as well! It was so...cute?
From A Fanfiction Angel

aww that was pretty sweet. I loved it :)

nice story, sad though.

Excellent beginning. I look forward to seeing the rest, G

I thought that that was PERFECT!! I think that you got them perfectly, I love the whole Tony sneaking thing, but Ziva TOTALLY knows that he's there! AWESOME!!♥

I really liked the part about Ziva sensing him a lot. Any chance it's going to have a sequel? Great job.

I would log in and do a aigned review, but I'm just impatient and just want to review already. Anyways, I love it, I just wished their was more... can I hope for a continuence(sp)? lol

I love it!

Good little story.

Sniff

Sad but good.