 Professor 1717 Pumpkin Head 2009-03-27 . chapter 1Nastasha and Argo,Well there are as many kind of couples as there are people, But do you make any stories of other characters, There arent enough Romances or Lemons about Sai Saici and Cecil or Domon and Allenby. |
 anonymous 2009-03-10 . chapter 17 GREAT STORY ! I loved it . Ive been trying to review but it wasnt working :/ . Anyways PLEASE WRITE another ARGO/NASTASHA story !
btw. i think that the idea for the story that you were gonna post was a good idea. ! PLEASE WRITE IT !! |
 BladeMaster357 2009-03-04 . chapter 14C'mon Argo, give Kier a thorough beating! ^_^ |
 2009-02-05 . chapter 8 awe nastashas pregnant ! Keep writing ! |
 2009-02-04 . chapter 7 keep writing ! And your next short story should be an argo nastasha lemon ! |
 Phoenix Girl 1991 2009-02-02 . chapter 5Riff, it's me~ As promised, I'm going to let you have a list of your mistakes. LOL
Chapter One: No misspellings!
Chapter Two: "Think" to "thing." (Remember being on the phone for this one? XD)
Chapter Three: "Brash" to "rash," "children" to "child," "droved" to "drove."
Chapter Four: Put "to" between "demanded" and "fiance," "goof" to "good," "brash" to "rash."
Chapter Five: Few suggestions (we'll talk at school if I remember them), but nothing spelled wrong from what I see! |
 2009-02-01 . chapter 4 great chappie ! Keep writing ! |
 2009-02-01 . chapter 3 great chapter ! Keep writing :D |
 2009-01-30 . chapter 2 good chappie ! I think that your next should be about argo and nastasha talking about the situation . Update soon ! |
 2009-01-29 . chapter 1 i can tell this will be a good story . I love them too and its good that someone can write a different type of story so good job . Please update soon :) |