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Fantasy Cat1
2009-11-24 . chapter 15
lol this is soo good i cried a little i just had my frist son well not just had he will be 1 yrs old next month and i had a flash back when i had my son very good keep going and update soon!

always your fan

fantasy cay
crystal the optimist
2009-11-23 . chapter 15
oh my god! those sounded like the cutest babies ever! forest green and icy blue eyes! brown ringlets! aw! Loved the tie thing, now the boys can have trouble playing with Stella.

Loved the names, where'd you get them. I mean, obviously I know where you got Ella from, but Nathaniel? I never would've thought of that. Good one, is it Nate for short?

If I were Murphy, I would've been so mad when my dad and Tristan's brothers rushed in. I wouldn't want them in there and she was naked too, from the shower. Did Tristan cover her before she gave birth? I don't think so. *snap*

haha, okay, great job! (say it like frosted flakes', tony the tiger) ~Crystalmarie.
xxxdivinecomedyxxx
2009-11-23 . chapter 15
I'm going to say it even with the risk of being called pedophile...I love Nathaniel/Nate! LOL. He's so cute.
His sister is too obviously.
The names are beautiful and fit so well.
Thanks for giving them and us the twins.
Update soon.
desiaa
2009-11-22 . chapter 13
Because of my immense laziness and unwilling desire to join, I shall take my poll vote and just say it here:

Girl.

Why? Because girls are just amazing. And having a super strong female is a wonderful thing. She can grow up wondering if it's weird that she's so much stronger than everyone else? Who knows, maybe she could be stronger than Murphy or Tristan? Just my opinion.

Keep up the good work anyways! I friggen LOVE this story. Sucks that it's a helper to my shameful procrastination!
crystal the optimist
2009-11-21 . chapter 14
I picked a girl because my dad and I both agreed that vampire girls would be cute, but vampire boys would be a little scary. Not to be sexist, but boys usually get into the most trouble.

I guess, for the story, you might want a boy for more comedy, but I'd also like to see the uncles deal with a girly girl. That would be hilarious! They'd have no idea how to play with her and Ella could freak out at them for playing with her with a football! They could hit her!

Hope I didn't overdue my explanation, ~Crystalmarie.
when i look in ur eyes
2009-11-21 . chapter 14
i think it should be a boy because i've always wanted an older brother. so if they have more children the younger ones have a protective older brother to help them XD plus i want a boy for my first child too so i geuss, i just hope it is a boy.
imagination57
2009-11-20 . chapter 14
Imma gonna vote now!
imagination57
2009-11-20 . chapter 13
Ah thou dare leave thy reviewers with the ending at which thou did? HUZZAH! Ahahahaha! Great job!
xxxdivinecomedyxxx
2009-11-20 . chapter 14
They so deserve a boy, I want a baby vamp boy for them. Besides being different than Twilight like you did put it, there are paths that the character can follow differently because being a male and similar paths a girl can follow too, hopefully my thought it isn't so confusing LOL. I've no problem with a girl if she wins.
Fantasy Cat1
2009-11-11 . chapter 13
baby is a girl amd hurry with the up date lol
VWH luv them all
2009-11-10 . chapter 13
LOVED THIS CHAPTER
cant wait to see what happens next with murphy and ben and ella and everybody
i love jared
and ben
though poor jared he has no one
bens still my favorite
and por murphy
and tristan
update soon!
crAzyweirdAbnokshis1
2009-11-09 . chapter 13
I love this story but i love ela the best...omg the babies comming...NOW! please update so i know what happens as soon as the baby is delivierd thanks a bunch luvs u
starlight08
2009-11-08 . chapter 13
I just finished reading both parts and let me just say that i loved the story! If had a different plot from the typical girl meets boy, then finds out he's a vamp. PLease continue, And I'm also LOVING the ben/ella relationship,so don't forget about them!
xxxdivinecomedyxxx
2009-11-04 . chapter 13
Thaks for updating. Update soon
I loved the chapter it was very funny. I'm loving to see EllaxBen, they're perfect together and I don't give a damn about what Ben thinks about it hehehe. Oh by the way I'm so excited waiting for the baby!
Songs From The Heart
2009-11-03 . chapter 13
okay well before I vote I would like to ask somewhat,

If it's a boy what will the rest of the plot line be?
"_" girl "_?"

Is there going to be another story about the kid after or not. All these questions make up my decision so I hope you can reply to me quick so I can vote and help get the next chapter up. I can't wait but yeah just give me basic if you don't know exactly yet I guess. It just helps me think of the story.
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