Wow.. beautiful.
Breath taking, I was in awe reading this.
I would love to read more of your stories.

Good job. Very realistic for someone in Naruto's position.

Sad, truly sad. What is worse is I have seen people from old to young go through being stuck in their memories. And this story reminds me of them. You wrote true to the type of emotions need for a story like this.

Bravo.

it's so depressing... so damn depressing

I can't help but cry reading this and I don't even know why. No, that's wrong...I do know why. You do very well to portray that sense of time slipping away from us, that sense of helplessness to avoid our inevitable demise. The journey you forced the characters to make it heartwrenching and soul shattering.

But I thank you for it. It was beautiful and please write more soon.