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Reviews for: The Thirtyseventh Hour
epalladino
2009-07-23 . chapter 1
Excellent episode tag. Thanks, Beth
ALEO
2009-02-04 . chapter 1
Good follow on for the episode. Both exhausted but determined to get home and sleep. Not too sure if sleeping on the driveway counts but at least they made it home. Interesting image though.
1st endeavor
2009-01-31 . chapter 1
This was a great tag to the episode and fits in perfectly.
Thanks for sharing.
Lily
2009-01-30 . chapter 1
Wow! This is so beautiful! I loved Don's reaction to Amita's tact ;-)
QuickenMyEnd
2009-01-30 . chapter 1
very sweet, cute image of the two of them falling asleep in the driveway
Ms.GrahamCracker
2009-01-30 . chapter 1
A wonderful touch of brotherly bonding. This piece was very well written, concise, insightful and realistic. My favorite line was; "The sun was warm on his face, the last of the shakes were wearing off, and with his back to the Suburban and Don at his shoulder, he wasn't going to fall over..."
Beautiful. Thank you so much for sharing this with us.
Pink Blackberry Girl
2009-01-30 . chapter 1
That was very well written and I loved the ending, great job!
FraidyCat
2009-01-30 . chapter 1
I love that slice of brotherhood. Better than pecan pie.
Lisa Paris
2009-01-30 . chapter 1
I really enjoyed reading this. A very sympathetic look at the boys relationship, and one it was comforting to read.

Nice to see Charlie being so scrupulously honest about the impact of his gift on both his life and Don's. Especially loved the ending.
PattyB
2009-01-29 . chapter 1
I like to think they found some laughter at the end. It had been a harrowing experience that
could have ended much worse.

The story is written very well. Some of the descriptive parts are almost poetic. Nice job.
Zaza
2009-01-29 . chapter 1
Lovely. Very . . . nice. A good nice, not a hohum nice. Look forward to more from you.
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