 epalladino 2009-07-23 . chapter 1Excellent episode tag. Thanks, Beth |
 ALEO 2009-02-04 . chapter 1Good follow on for the episode. Both exhausted but determined to get home and sleep. Not too sure if sleeping on the driveway counts but at least they made it home. Interesting image though. |
 1st endeavor 2009-01-31 . chapter 1This was a great tag to the episode and fits in perfectly.
Thanks for sharing. |
 Lily 2009-01-30 . chapter 1 Wow! This is so beautiful! I loved Don's reaction to Amita's tact ;-) |
 QuickenMyEnd 2009-01-30 . chapter 1very sweet, cute image of the two of them falling asleep in the driveway |
 Ms.GrahamCracker 2009-01-30 . chapter 1A wonderful touch of brotherly bonding. This piece was very well written, concise, insightful and realistic. My favorite line was; "The sun was warm on his face, the last of the shakes were wearing off, and with his back to the Suburban and Don at his shoulder, he wasn't going to fall over..."
Beautiful. Thank you so much for sharing this with us. |
 Pink Blackberry Girl 2009-01-30 . chapter 1That was very well written and I loved the ending, great job! |
 FraidyCat 2009-01-30 . chapter 1I love that slice of brotherhood. Better than pecan pie. |
 Lisa Paris 2009-01-30 . chapter 1I really enjoyed reading this. A very sympathetic look at the boys relationship, and one it was comforting to read.
Nice to see Charlie being so scrupulously honest about the impact of his gift on both his life and Don's. Especially loved the ending. |
 PattyB 2009-01-29 . chapter 1I like to think they found some laughter at the end. It had been a harrowing experience that
could have ended much worse.
The story is written very well. Some of the descriptive parts are almost poetic. Nice job. |
 Zaza 2009-01-29 . chapter 1 Lovely. Very . . . nice. A good nice, not a hohum nice. Look forward to more from you. |