I'm just going to come out and say it: What the ** was that?!
Intriguing? yes
Confusing? most definitely wished you had explained what was going on better.
nice little oneshot though

I enjoyed this story.

I had to read it a couple of times to fully understand because it is very nuanced. And also full of emotion.

Good job.

good start :)

Delicate mystery and carefully weaved character alongside appropriate sensory input.

You have admirable skill.

For some reason I like HpLe. I think it's a very good story. I can't tell if Harry is dark or light which makes it a very intresting read. I read it and then I went back and read it again. Thanks for a good story! :)

This was really well written, with a huge twist at the end.

I love this idea of Harry going back in time and ending up becoming a death eater. Have you read any stories like that, that you could tell me? I love dark!harry.

Interesting, short but I liked it.

Very emotional.I like it.Especially the killing of James.:D

good start :)

Definitely need to develop this!

Weird story, but I'm sure it can be better once it has fully developed. Keep up the good work!

Strange, but i like it. Is it a oneshot?