Your stories are really well written and wonderful to read. The first two of this set I kept thinking "Poor Adam". Now I find myself thinking "Poor Duncan"! The idea of him and Evil-Lyn together is quite vomit-imducing indeed! I can't wait to see Adam finally get his sword back and set things right!

Poor Duncan. At least they can believe he's under a spell, and still keep working on a rescue. Teela's reaction will be very interesting indeed!

This just got so much more complicated, with Adam being used as a hostage against Duncan. I wonder how Duncan can ever get out of it.

Adam's just made Duncan's situation a lot worse. It'll be interesting to see how he manages to make Adam think he's willingly hanging out at Snake Mountain.

This is really a nightmare for Duncan. Well written.

Ooh, poor, poor Duncan. I seriously pity him, right now. But I'm so glad that you updated that I'm just practically jumping for joy! Yay for Eideann!

... O.o Poor Duncan. I really pity him. No, seriously, I really DO pity him, right now. Hmm, is Adam going to have to knock Duncan out and drag him out of Snake Mountain? That would be slightly amusing...

Great story, great trilogy!

A really well told story. I have to admit I thought it would be Teela to reach Snake Mountain first. Can't wait for Chapter 8.

“I’m completely trustworthy. You just have to remember that I’m selfish and greedy and will nearly always act in my own self-interest. Your best bet, dear Duncan, is to see that your interests and mine always coincide.” -- that's a very accurate description of Evil-Lyn. I like how Orko is contributing to the rescue. Let's hope his spell keeps up.

You asked for feedback, so here goes:

I'm very curious to see where this is going. From your previous stories, it's easy to tell that there's more to it than what we've seen, and you even said it's long. Right now I'm a bit impatient to see what will happen next!

On a negative note, I do feel like the parts with Duncan and Evil-Lyn are dragging a bit, just because it feels like nothing different has happened with them in a few chapters. However, I think that has more to do with my impatience than your writing!!

In comparison to "Highest Bidder" (because it's easy to compare them due to the subject matter and posting times), I'm not quite as hooked on this as the other one. I probably will be soon though. I also find it interesting to compare the two Evil-Lyns; one defects against Skeletor for him planning to do pretty much the same thing her counterpart is doing!!

Anyway, I am enjoying it!

I've enjoyed this series as it progressed into more logical responses from Skeletor and his minions. The subject with Duncan is uncomfortable for some, but is a logical result of byplay in the other stories in the series. Adam's frustration is getting worse, and I look forward to seeing the continuation of this story.

I liked how you detailed Adam's conclusions in his research. Duncan's plight is chilling. I hope he survives.

Skillfully written, and hard to read at the same time because of the topic.
Evil-Lyn really deserves her name, with how she is twisting Duncan's mind.

This is interesting and I like your other stories too.

Please update soon.

Evil-Lyn's advances toward Man-at-Arms are creepy, not sexy at all, which is exactly how it should be.
I liked how you depict Man-at-Arms as an engineer, and how research is important.