a great story

I'm enjoying your stoy. Found it on another storys links;) This is a different way to see Edward.

Nicely written, good paced, easy to read story.

She finally got her wish, nice one, what a great way to end!

So she is changing? This may not be a bad thing!

Actually that was a pretty good rendition of drug withdrawl, I hope for your sake you don't know what it feels like! Nicely done!

Oh dear, why is he so determined for her to stay human? She will be his forever!

Well that was a little foolish,but the results were sure worth it! Good one!

Edward and his guilt he really doesn't give up does he?

Subtle but still hot, I was wriggling a little reading this, well done!

THank you! Did catch the quote! Now let's see if they can please each other without the blood, this will be fun!

Hello!What are they up to? Is she starting to change or is it something else?

Ooooooo! This could definately be fun!

nice, definately a start!

I bow to the master, that is just plain nasty! Bravo!