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Bellatrix Kale
2009-10-30 . chapter 12
I'm happy for the update but where are they going? What's this job? Urgh. The suspense! O_o
Bellatrix Kale
2009-10-30 . chapter 11
*head tilt* Hmm? Englehorn got something important to say?...
corbsxx
2009-10-30 . chapter 12
wow double update ! NICE !! finally we get a clue as to whats going on ..sort of..not really but anyway great chapterS !
Random Reader
2009-10-12 . chapter 1
Yes! An update! You're on a roll...keep going! :)
corbsxx
2009-10-12 . chapter 10
oh nice cliffie cant wait for he next chapter !
Bellatrix Kale
2009-10-11 . chapter 10
So glad for the update. I totally thought Ivory & Preston were gunna kiss for a second in the hold. But it was prolly just me. :)
corbsxx
2009-10-11 . chapter 9
this was really good i cant wait till the next chapter !
Random Reader
2009-10-10 . chapter 9
I REALLY like this story so far! Please update soon! I love the suspense and detail. And I really liked chapter 8, with the chemistry between Ivory and Preston. But the entire story is great, so keep writing.
Bellatrix Kale
2009-10-10 . chapter 9
Short but good. Nightmares of what could have been-very interesting. Can't wait for the next chapter. :)
Bellatrix Kale
2009-10-10 . chapter 8
More! ^^ I liked this chapter but if there's a pairing, I can't figure it out... Hmm.
corbsxx
2009-10-04 . chapter 7
this is really good update soon please !!??
Bellatrix Kale
2009-08-04 . chapter 7
Yay for an update! I' just itching to find out if she'll ever know about the Skull Island adventure.
elvespiratesandcowboysohmy
2009-07-24 . chapter 6
Okay, I lied. This is not only getting great. It's getting excelent. Haha. Sorry, I'm lame, and I haven't had the usual sugar dosage that makes my review great just yet this morning. But I really really love this so far, as you very well know. Poor Ive, all in the dark not knowing about the secret. I wonder who's going to finally tell her, Preston or Jimmy, and if the truth will make a difference in their relationship. Aw, poor Lumpy, I always wanted him to live again... Update soon!
elvespiratesandcowboysohmy
2009-07-24 . chapter 5
Me likey! Me likey! Wanna know my favorite line? “Well isn’t this just turning into one big reunion.” Hilarious! I just loved it. Okay, this trianle thing that's starting to form between Ivory, Preston and Jimmy. Me no likey likey. Because it means that ultimately someone is going to get hurt. But, haha, that's life, eh? Just heartbreaking most of the time. This is starting to get really really good. One more chapter...til you update of course.
elvespiratesandcowboysohmy
2009-07-24 . chapter 4
Nope. Nuh uh. Just a tad different than Coney Island. But still what the gouda cheese is happening?! Great chapter! But I'm moving on to see what happens next...
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