|Reviews for She Speaks in Third Person|
| MoonDustx 12/19/09 . chapter 1
I think you tore my heart into two.
I mean, the way you portrayed Olette made
me all gloomy; as though her life is
completely hopeless in the real world.
And the ending was just so bone-chilling
that I ended up craving for more.
| Selryam 11/14/09 . chapter 1
Your tragedies are beautiful.
| Born 13th Month 32nd Day 8/7/09 . chapter 1
Sad! But so awesome! That was really, really fabulous and intense. Keep it up.
| songs 6/17/09 . chapter 1
this is just amazing.
and this review is YEARS LATE lol.
moremore roxette please?
| 12q 5/18/09 . chapter 1
I want to keyboard-smash because this is so damn beautiful, but I don't know what to say and, I don't know, it's my first Roxas/Olette and it's beautiful, so beautiful, and thank you for writing this — thank you.
| fug 5/1/09 . chapter 1
You should so write a NaminéRoxas. Great job, nonetheless.
| Wootzel 2/10/09 . chapter 1
I think I just found my favorite FanFic.
This was amazing in every way and just so tragically SAD. But in a weird way I could see it totally happening (you know, if Square Enix wasn't so intent on making KH completely family friendly). It really gives a new outlook to Olette that ties in wonderfully with the actual Twilight Town featured in KH.
I really enjoyed it, I almost cried at the end. xD
| Loserfish 2/8/09 . chapter 1
Wow. Just wow.
I liked your interesting take on Olette; most people just portray her as just sunny or melancholy/wistful for Roxas (whether, she recognizes it's Roxas or not is a different matter) but you made her more fragile and on the edge of nervous breakdown. And somehow, it works and gives a darker edge to her I never would have imagined.
The small bits of Hayner, Seifer, and Pence was nice too. I almost totally forgot it was Roxas/Olette until I got to the end and I was like, WOW, what a perfect cincher. It nearly gave me the chills.
Great job and keep it up!
| acronymed 2/1/09 . chapter 1
BRB FANGIRLING YOU & THIS FOR FOREVER K.
| Overripe 2/1/09 . chapter 1
Gave me the Willies! Good job!
| i AM the Random Idiot 1/30/09 . chapter 1
| Lovebites and Popcorn 1/30/09 . chapter 1
Okay. Wow. There's just something beautiful and magical about this fic that I can't quite put my finger on. While I've never actually read anything strictly Olette-centric (so you can safely call this my first), and I've never believed myself ever actually /wanting/ to read something Olette-centric, I've got to say, after reading what you wrote, I was quite amazed.
Needless to say, I fell in love with this. The way you made everything, everyone, the /entire town/ so surreal and dream-like and almost exactly like how the simulated Twilight Town would have been, the way you let time distort itself in Olette's eyes and how you made everyone around her seem like they don't really care for her existence... simply amazing. And beautiful.
In several ways, the whole story itself had a very sad, melancholic, almost depressing feel to it. But the ending, oh, the ending gave so much /hope/ to it, too.
Thank you for this wonderful read. (:
| MyIncentive 1/30/09 . chapter 1
I'll admit I was a bit hesitant reading this at first - Haynette fan, heh heh - but the deeper into the story I got the more I really felt for Olette. Poor girl, it really seems like she's one step away from snapping completely.
Yes, I find her a very likeable character too. She's just... cool. D
A very moving read.
| SSanon 1/30/09 . chapter 1
Hm. Nice. Not very shippy, but a nice read all the same. (Well, 'nice' isn't the word, since 'nice' is not exactly your style, but meh.)
I think I prefer Olette with Seifer. Well, she always seems to know where he is...
"Seifer's in the back alley, practicing."
Or something like that.