Wow, I feel like I have a really dirty mind for a fifteen year old, but this story was hilarious anyway :D Hope to read more stories, whether already or soon-to-be published. Thanks for posting :)

Though it sounds like they're going to do IT, it's obvious they're. Can't wait to find out what's really going on . . .

I loved it. Although I would never want to see this on screen, it is a WONDERFUL gift that Bella gave to Edward. One thing though, wouldn't his eyes have turned red?

I agree with Stephenie. You presented it well.

That's sweet, in a sick sort of way.

cool...

This was kinda dark for Edward...not sure ;)

i like it! nice ending very good

im so curoius to find out what they mean!

Is it sick that I actually found this kinda cute? :-?

This was one of the first fanfic pieces I read over a year ago but I didn't take the time ot review it until now. I reread it tonight and love it as much as the first time. I think that Bella would have offered and Edward, in spite of his hesitation, would have agreed because he had already tasted her blood in Twilight and would have wanted a "2nd" safer taste. Thanks for a lovely story.

I love it. )

My mind is stuck in the gutter, but since this is rated Teen, I'm pretty sure I'm wrong.. Lol. I can't wait to find out what's really going on. )

You were right. This is a really out of character Edward. Knowing Bella, I think we could safely assume that she'd be up for that kind of thing but from Edward I was really surprised at how this story turned out. I really enjoyed reading it too.

I have to agree with you it's very out of character for Edward. But Bella would surely offer.